IS . . .THERE . . . ANY . . . NEWS . . . ABOUT . . . X-ALITY?
Well, matter of fact there is. Thank you for asking. =)
Jerry. B. Jenkins has gone through the first chapter and chopped it from 5 pages to 2. That is a lot of editing folks. I've been working on the second chapter and Mr. Jenkins has kindly given me pointers on that as well. I may be adding completely new material as well. Which means more adventure for you readers.
Mr. Jenkins was saying that my title maybe to confusing for marketing. So I'm thinking of making a new title for my manuscript. But I'm stuck and need help. Please read my synopsis and try and come up with an idea for a title I can't promise I'll use the titles but then again I might. Here is the synopsis for X-ality (er my manuscript). Post your title idea as a comment below . . .
"Sixteen-year-old Jason Sorn has a normal life, friends, and goes to school like other American kids. But everything changes when his parents are mysteriously murdered and Jason must move in with his uncle and aunt in Montana. Six months later, while his aunt and uncle are away on a business trip, Jason is seriously injured in a traffic accident. At the hospital, doctors discover an inexplicable new organ growing inside his body. Soon, the FBI becomes involved. Jason is baffled over their interest in him.
Before the FBI can move Jason to a secure facility to study this unusual development, a shadowy agency comes after him. Terrified, Jason runs. He doesn’t trust the FBI, and he has no idea who this other sinister agency—ANO, Agents of the New Order—is. Worse, Jason does not know what is going on inside his body. Why he is haunted by visions of sinister, yellow eyes? Why can he toss people and semi-trucks around with his mind? Is this why he has become the hunted?
Leon Weston, a man with a dark past, comes across Jason and hides him from ANO and the FBI. Jason is drawn to Leon but wonders why he would help . . . and what he is hiding. Leon possesses the ability to see in the future and has invulnerable skin. Leon introduces Jason to others like him, who exhibit unusual powers: Rachel who wields fire with her hands and Jude who can teleport.
Jason learns the reason he has been drawn into this extraordinary circle of unique people: ANO has infiltrated the FBI and plans to start World War III for their own nefarious purposes. Leon’s group, of which Jason is now a member, uncovers a factory where ANO is building an army. Using their God-given super powers, they must destroy it. But as Jason and his friends slip into the factory to plant bombs, everything falls apart. Jason is shot, ANO stops the explosions, and most of the strike team is killed. It appears their mission has failed.
As Jason’s life fades, he finds himself in his mentor’s arms. He asks Leon why he helped him in the first place. Leon reveals that he is Jason’s adopted brother. He’d run away before Jason was born because of his guilt for the death of a loved one. Sadly, Jason dies before hearing this confession.
Leon yells at God to show Himself, but only Jude appears and says they need to leave. When Leon touches Jude, their world spins. The two find themselves back in the past—before the destruction. In shock, Jude has just proven he has the ability to time travel.
Now alive, Jason helps destroy the factory and fights against other ANO super villains. Defeating the enemy, Jason and the others return to their home, grateful to be alive—this time."
You guys are amazing. Thanks.
NOTICE: I just realized that the comments are not working well. So go ahead and post your title ideas on my Facebook Author page. https://www.facebook.com/pages/Daniel-Kuehn/1428516144079464?ref=bookmarks
Sixteen-year-old
Jason Sorn has a normal life, friends, and goes to school like other
American kids. But everything changes when his parents are mysteriously
murdered and Jason must move in with his uncle and aunt in Montana. Six
months later, while his aunt and uncle are away on a business trip,
Jason is seriously injured in a traffic accident. At the hospital,
doctors discover an inexplicable new organ growing inside his body.
Soon, the FBI becomes involved. Jason is baffled over their interest in
him.
Before the FBI can move Jason to a secure facility to study this unusual development, a shadowy agency comes after him. Terrified, Jason runs. He doesn’t trust the FBI, and he has no idea who this other sinister agency—ANO, Agents of the New Order—is. Worse, Jason does not know what is going on inside his body. Why he is haunted by visions of sinister, yellow eyes? Why can he toss people and semi-trucks around with his mind? Is this why he has become the hunted?
Leon Weston, a man with a dark past, comes across Jason and hides him from ANO and the FBI. Jason is drawn to Leon but wonders why he would help . . . and what he is hiding. Leon possesses the ability to see in the future and has invulnerable skin. Leon introduces Jason to others like him, who exhibit unusual powers: Rachel who wields fire with her hands and Jude who can teleport.
Jason learns the reason he has been drawn into this extraordinary circle of unique people: ANO has infiltrated the FBI and plans to start World War III for their own nefarious purposes. Leon’s group, of which Jason is now a member, uncovers a factory where ANO is building an army. Using their God-given super powers, they must destroy it. But as Jason and his friends slip into the factory to plant bombs, everything falls apart. Jason is shot, ANO stops the explosions, and most of the strike team is killed. It appears their mission has failed.
As Jason’s life fades, he finds himself in his mentor’s arms. He asks Leon why he helped him in the first place. Leon reveals that he is Jason’s adopted brother. He’d run away before Jason was born because of his guilt for the death of a loved one. Sadly, Jason dies before hearing this confession.
Leon yells at God to show Himself, but only Jude appears and says they need to leave. When Leon touches Jude, their world spins. The two find themselves back in the past—before the destruction. In shock, Jude has just proven he has the ability to time travel.
Now alive, Jason helps destroy the factory and fights against other ANO super villains. Defeating the enemy, Jason and the others return to their home, grateful to be alive—this time. - See more at: https://www.crowdscribed.com/challenges/74#sthash.5gziIBFh.dpuf
Before the FBI can move Jason to a secure facility to study this unusual development, a shadowy agency comes after him. Terrified, Jason runs. He doesn’t trust the FBI, and he has no idea who this other sinister agency—ANO, Agents of the New Order—is. Worse, Jason does not know what is going on inside his body. Why he is haunted by visions of sinister, yellow eyes? Why can he toss people and semi-trucks around with his mind? Is this why he has become the hunted?
Leon Weston, a man with a dark past, comes across Jason and hides him from ANO and the FBI. Jason is drawn to Leon but wonders why he would help . . . and what he is hiding. Leon possesses the ability to see in the future and has invulnerable skin. Leon introduces Jason to others like him, who exhibit unusual powers: Rachel who wields fire with her hands and Jude who can teleport.
Jason learns the reason he has been drawn into this extraordinary circle of unique people: ANO has infiltrated the FBI and plans to start World War III for their own nefarious purposes. Leon’s group, of which Jason is now a member, uncovers a factory where ANO is building an army. Using their God-given super powers, they must destroy it. But as Jason and his friends slip into the factory to plant bombs, everything falls apart. Jason is shot, ANO stops the explosions, and most of the strike team is killed. It appears their mission has failed.
As Jason’s life fades, he finds himself in his mentor’s arms. He asks Leon why he helped him in the first place. Leon reveals that he is Jason’s adopted brother. He’d run away before Jason was born because of his guilt for the death of a loved one. Sadly, Jason dies before hearing this confession.
Leon yells at God to show Himself, but only Jude appears and says they need to leave. When Leon touches Jude, their world spins. The two find themselves back in the past—before the destruction. In shock, Jude has just proven he has the ability to time travel.
Now alive, Jason helps destroy the factory and fights against other ANO super villains. Defeating the enemy, Jason and the others return to their home, grateful to be alive—this time. - See more at: https://www.crowdscribed.com/challenges/74#sthash.5gziIBFh.dpuf
Sixteen-year-old
Jason Sorn has a normal life, friends, and goes to school like other
American kids. But everything changes when his parents are mysteriously
murdered and Jason must move in with his uncle and aunt in Montana. Six
months later, while his aunt and uncle are away on a business trip,
Jason is seriously injured in a traffic accident. At the hospital,
doctors discover an inexplicable new organ growing inside his body.
Soon, the FBI becomes involved. Jason is baffled over their interest in
him.
Before the FBI can move Jason to a secure facility to study this unusual development, a shadowy agency comes after him. Terrified, Jason runs. He doesn’t trust the FBI, and he has no idea who this other sinister agency—ANO, Agents of the New Order—is. Worse, Jason does not know what is going on inside his body. Why he is haunted by visions of sinister, yellow eyes? Why can he toss people and semi-trucks around with his mind? Is this why he has become the hunted?
Leon Weston, a man with a dark past, comes across Jason and hides him from ANO and the FBI. Jason is drawn to Leon but wonders why he would help . . . and what he is hiding. Leon possesses the ability to see in the future and has invulnerable skin. Leon introduces Jason to others like him, who exhibit unusual powers: Rachel who wields fire with her hands and Jude who can teleport.
Jason learns the reason he has been drawn into this extraordinary circle of unique people: ANO has infiltrated the FBI and plans to start World War III for their own nefarious purposes. Leon’s group, of which Jason is now a member, uncovers a factory where ANO is building an army. Using their God-given super powers, they must destroy it. But as Jason and his friends slip into the factory to plant bombs, everything falls apart. Jason is shot, ANO stops the explosions, and most of the strike team is killed. It appears their mission has failed.
As Jason’s life fades, he finds himself in his mentor’s arms. He asks Leon why he helped him in the first place. Leon reveals that he is Jason’s adopted brother. He’d run away before Jason was born because of his guilt for the death of a loved one. Sadly, Jason dies before hearing this confession.
Leon yells at God to show Himself, but only Jude appears and says they need to leave. When Leon touches Jude, their world spins. The two find themselves back in the past—before the destruction. In shock, Jude has just proven he has the ability to time travel.
Now alive, Jason helps destroy the factory and fights against other ANO super villains. Defeating the enemy, Jason and the others return to their home, grateful to be alive—this time. - See more at: https://www.crowdscribed.com/challenges/74#sthash.ARhVpkFl.dpuf
Before the FBI can move Jason to a secure facility to study this unusual development, a shadowy agency comes after him. Terrified, Jason runs. He doesn’t trust the FBI, and he has no idea who this other sinister agency—ANO, Agents of the New Order—is. Worse, Jason does not know what is going on inside his body. Why he is haunted by visions of sinister, yellow eyes? Why can he toss people and semi-trucks around with his mind? Is this why he has become the hunted?
Leon Weston, a man with a dark past, comes across Jason and hides him from ANO and the FBI. Jason is drawn to Leon but wonders why he would help . . . and what he is hiding. Leon possesses the ability to see in the future and has invulnerable skin. Leon introduces Jason to others like him, who exhibit unusual powers: Rachel who wields fire with her hands and Jude who can teleport.
Jason learns the reason he has been drawn into this extraordinary circle of unique people: ANO has infiltrated the FBI and plans to start World War III for their own nefarious purposes. Leon’s group, of which Jason is now a member, uncovers a factory where ANO is building an army. Using their God-given super powers, they must destroy it. But as Jason and his friends slip into the factory to plant bombs, everything falls apart. Jason is shot, ANO stops the explosions, and most of the strike team is killed. It appears their mission has failed.
As Jason’s life fades, he finds himself in his mentor’s arms. He asks Leon why he helped him in the first place. Leon reveals that he is Jason’s adopted brother. He’d run away before Jason was born because of his guilt for the death of a loved one. Sadly, Jason dies before hearing this confession.
Leon yells at God to show Himself, but only Jude appears and says they need to leave. When Leon touches Jude, their world spins. The two find themselves back in the past—before the destruction. In shock, Jude has just proven he has the ability to time travel.
Now alive, Jason helps destroy the factory and fights against other ANO super villains. Defeating the enemy, Jason and the others return to their home, grateful to be alive—this time. - See more at: https://www.crowdscribed.com/challenges/74#sthash.ARhVpkFl.dpuf
Sixteen-year-old
Jason Sorn has a normal life, friends, and goes to school like other
American kids. But everything changes when his parents are mysteriously
murdered and Jason must move in with his uncle and aunt in Montana. Six
months later, while his aunt and uncle are away on a business trip,
Jason is seriously injured in a traffic accident. At the hospital,
doctors discover an inexplicable new organ growing inside his body.
Soon, the FBI becomes involved. Jason is baffled over their interest in
him.
Before the FBI can move Jason to a secure facility to study this unusual development, a shadowy agency comes after him. Terrified, Jason runs. He doesn’t trust the FBI, and he has no idea who this other sinister agency—ANO, Agents of the New Order—is. Worse, Jason does not know what is going on inside his body. Why he is haunted by visions of sinister, yellow eyes? Why can he toss people and semi-trucks around with his mind? Is this why he has become the hunted?
Leon Weston, a man with a dark past, comes across Jason and hides him from ANO and the FBI. Jason is drawn to Leon but wonders why he would help . . . and what he is hiding. Leon possesses the ability to see in the future and has invulnerable skin. Leon introduces Jason to others like him, who exhibit unusual powers: Rachel who wields fire with her hands and Jude who can teleport.
Jason learns the reason he has been drawn into this extraordinary circle of unique people: ANO has infiltrated the FBI and plans to start World War III for their own nefarious purposes. Leon’s group, of which Jason is now a member, uncovers a factory where ANO is building an army. Using their God-given super powers, they must destroy it. But as Jason and his friends slip into the factory to plant bombs, everything falls apart. Jason is shot, ANO stops the explosions, and most of the strike team is killed. It appears their mission has failed.
As Jason’s life fades, he finds himself in his mentor’s arms. He asks Leon why he helped him in the first place. Leon reveals that he is Jason’s adopted brother. He’d run away before Jason was born because of his guilt for the death of a loved one. Sadly, Jason dies before hearing this confession.
Leon yells at God to show Himself, but only Jude appears and says they need to leave. When Leon touches Jude, their world spins. The two find themselves back in the past—before the destruction. In shock, Jude has just proven he has the ability to time travel.
Now alive, Jason helps destroy the factory and fights against other ANO super villains. Defeating the enemy, Jason and the others return to their home, grateful to be alive—this time. - See more at: https://www.crowdscribed.com/challenges/74#sthash.ARhVpkFl.dpuf
Before the FBI can move Jason to a secure facility to study this unusual development, a shadowy agency comes after him. Terrified, Jason runs. He doesn’t trust the FBI, and he has no idea who this other sinister agency—ANO, Agents of the New Order—is. Worse, Jason does not know what is going on inside his body. Why he is haunted by visions of sinister, yellow eyes? Why can he toss people and semi-trucks around with his mind? Is this why he has become the hunted?
Leon Weston, a man with a dark past, comes across Jason and hides him from ANO and the FBI. Jason is drawn to Leon but wonders why he would help . . . and what he is hiding. Leon possesses the ability to see in the future and has invulnerable skin. Leon introduces Jason to others like him, who exhibit unusual powers: Rachel who wields fire with her hands and Jude who can teleport.
Jason learns the reason he has been drawn into this extraordinary circle of unique people: ANO has infiltrated the FBI and plans to start World War III for their own nefarious purposes. Leon’s group, of which Jason is now a member, uncovers a factory where ANO is building an army. Using their God-given super powers, they must destroy it. But as Jason and his friends slip into the factory to plant bombs, everything falls apart. Jason is shot, ANO stops the explosions, and most of the strike team is killed. It appears their mission has failed.
As Jason’s life fades, he finds himself in his mentor’s arms. He asks Leon why he helped him in the first place. Leon reveals that he is Jason’s adopted brother. He’d run away before Jason was born because of his guilt for the death of a loved one. Sadly, Jason dies before hearing this confession.
Leon yells at God to show Himself, but only Jude appears and says they need to leave. When Leon touches Jude, their world spins. The two find themselves back in the past—before the destruction. In shock, Jude has just proven he has the ability to time travel.
Now alive, Jason helps destroy the factory and fights against other ANO super villains. Defeating the enemy, Jason and the others return to their home, grateful to be alive—this time. - See more at: https://www.crowdscribed.com/challenges/74#sthash.ARhVpkFl.dpuf
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